Middle Of

[zero9zero]

Arkansas.
What was once a crisp
November night currently
Finds me standing
In the elements
Sporting a t-shirt
And a goofy grin.
I take another hit
And star into the clear
Late night sky
I'll always remember..
The first night.
"Haven't seen that in awhile"
The stars, clarity, freedom
Sometimes its nice to get away
For good.
Even highways seem
To call it a night
Around 1 or so..
Perhaps a stray semi or two
But nothing more..
Absolute silence.
I'll always remember the first night.
My ears so pleased for once,
To be filled by absolutely nothing
Except warm, peaceful silence.
Sometimes its nice
Living in the middle of..
dave

 

[Noodle]

I feel ya'.

 

[5FACES]

sit, relax, take a hit, get lost in thought,
all my your self!
I'm defintely feelin your poem!!

 

[Aja909]

This is Phat

 

[zero9zero]

goin out to ya.
(see icon above)
inspired and influenced.

dave

 

[ice-9]

preach on brudda.

 

[skarazira]

Good job dave.

As always.... hehe.
I am going to visit you one of these days!!
sara

 

[MiNiMoWs]

that was soooo good.

 

[EbowTheLetter]

Dave's a poet, and I didn't know it. ha!
I really like this, bro.
"I'll always remember the first night.
My ears so pleased for once,
To be filled by absolutely nothing
Except warm, peaceful silence."
Warm, peaceful silence. Many a night like this brought me back to life this past season. I'm glad I'm not the only one who appreciates the wonderful side of silence

 

[Mellabopper]

dizam!
rock on!

 

[alykitty]

N I C E!!!

 

[zero9zero]

damn.
thank you all seriously.
i think this is the most responses i've ever gotten to a piece i've posted.
so.. thank you.

much love,
dave