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drea

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i could throw you one more overused and tarnished metaphor.
a feverish jumbled diatribe
about that frozen thought
about that snowy glaze
about that unsteady smirk
that procures a little riot in my mind
but ill slip you a tiny little glance from me
a nothing notion from behind glass walls
in the thought that maybe someday
the rhythm of my blinking will incite a song or two
in the hopes that when my magnetized grasp
latches on to such a coveted sideways smile....
resistance to many, will be my stronghold for the night.
and when night turns bright light
youll be there yet again.
one last exhaustive metaphor, for the chill of your ice-pursed grin.
but first,
trust.
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life is pain, buttercup...anyone who tells you otherwise is selling something.
 
its from the princess bride,...the best movie on earth
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Princess bride rules... I just watched that the other day... haha I have seen that movie like 50 times.
another nice poem
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-s
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Aim- oogmerk513
^ cus im a loser
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[This message has been edited by skarazira (edited 19 November 2001).]
 
well. i like it.
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*cuddle*
ry.
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"Euphoric, narcotic, pleasantly hallucinant."
 
as always, loved it
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You gotta be a bad girl in this world to be heard--DJ Rap
"The integrity of a man's creative work is of greater importance than any charitable endeavor. Those of you who do not understand this are the men destroying the world"
"I'm not here to be served, but to serve"
 
i was going to quote the parts that i really liked... but then i realized i was just about to quote 2/3 of the poem.
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good stuff.
Mella
 
nice
ending was abrupt, left me wanting more more more!!
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"curiouser and curiouser..." -alice
 
honey, if i had to choose a favorite poet, you would be about 50 leaps ahead of robert frost.
i ought to take a picture of my room and post it. i think a couple people would step back and say "oh geez, she's nuts" and another few would say "i thought i was the only psycho would did that"... one wall of my room is completely covered in fliers from my favorite parties. i used to have fliers from other parties too but i used up all the space and had to take a lot down. 2 of my walls are covered from floor to ceiling in pictures of me and my friends, happy moments.
and one wall started out as my "plain wall", and all it had on it was one or 2 poems that i printed out from this forum because they really inspired me. over the past year, the entire wall is almost covered, and as i printed this poem out to hang on that wall, i realized that about a quarter of those poems are all written by you.
that might not seem like much of a compliment, but it is supposed to be. thank you for many many inspirations.
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E-girl
IM: tiggersgurl2067
Find one person you can count on forever, one person you can love forever, and one person you can be with forever... and if you're lucky, it will all be the same person.
"Live for the memories."
 
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