Memories Lost

[BuddhaSmokedPot]

with every hoot i close my eyes and a new me will arise. memories lost, replaced with visions, shouting voices, and changing decisions. a broken heart with shatterd dreams, a different person it what it seems. this addiction i have is one i like, i'll keep it up, i see no fight. lifting my soul i'm so relieved, drifting away i'm so concieved. the dreams once thought have since passed on, with this changing person soon to be gone. lost in limbo, stuck in space, the one true me has forgotten her face. my heart lives on with a silent beat, my mind so high the drugs so deep. who's to trust with all these confusions, all these thoughts bring alternate solutions. an imagined me lost and torn a delusional body, not the one that was born. a name the same, a memory to find, a tourtured soul, and a pricy fine. much potential the i once had, traded for drugs and a life gone bad.

 

[RareForm]

*hugs*

this is truly a good poem..

i didn't know you could write like this...

 

[BuddhaSmokedPot]

thanx so much sweetie

 

[IXinX]

good poem
but it isn't really a poem if its not structured in paragraphs and verses and what-not

or is it?

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

i like the way it rhymes but isnt structured, it works very well here. a good write.

 

[jaymie]

that was something, definitely something good. me likes keep it up.

poetry is not often born of structure in the first place, who says it has to end that way?

 

[BuddhaSmokedPot]

poetry does not necessarily have to be in any kind of structural form.. its a form of your emotions...

thanx for the comments guys