mc? rhyme.....

[cammo]

sometimes not yet ready, yet set and steady
at the starting line
wondering when your gonna find time
all seems to distant, but if persistant
the things that clutter your mind all disappear in an instant
to be replaced by a very clear time line
in which to plan thoughts and make rhyme
which in turn is a release to make even the greatest tensions cease
filtering peace dripping into your mind
and the levels increase
your body,
feeling the pleasure of a mind without conflict,
and living begins.
So this is what they mean when they say it's like being a child again.........

 

[rm-rf]

yo wha?
but but what if yo not ready
to skip the stress an be steady
and find the way to flow the words from your mind
havent yet found the place
to get the lyrical taste
cuz it takes practice and time
the pleasure of mind, throughout your life
takes a lotta damn time
and a flowin vision from inside
one day youll see it
within yo mind it'l fit
and ideas will come before ya quit
wit freedom to choose from within
pleanty of rhymes to bend
and youll say its bein like a child again

 

[rm-rf]

yah man that was sweet
'minds meh of the gettin stoned dayz.

 

[cammo]

thanks wood, great reply too.
i'll be damn sure to show that to my friends
we just had a rhyme off..... good fun