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Queen Beat

Queen Beat

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The humidity is intoxicating
But the pressure of your sticky skin against mine is so comforting
I've never felt this close to anyone.
How strange
To think
I'd all but given up six months ago
On life and love and laughter that wasn't strained.
How strange
To think
I'd left my emotions on the cutting room floor
In that hasty editing process we call
Healing.
Forget that hour (if you want to get through today)
Ignore that lie (there's so much more to remember)
Erase that moment (it will only make you cry).
Feet tangled in bed
Hearts tangled in time
You have the gentlest eyes of anyone I've seen
And yet they cut through me so easily.
I love that.
You whisper thoughts in my ear
And I can feel that you mean it
You know that I need it
And I want you to take it.
The heat rises and sweat starts to slide...
Maybe one day you'll know how much I love you.
 
hun, you simply cannot know how much ive missed reading your posts. they always speak to a place in me... its the human part of me, the part that has to deal intimately with life and the world around me, and i so often try to block that part out, squash it away somewhere and run off on it. but i cant do that, i have to be human, and i have to deal with the world, i cant just run away, at least not yet, ive come to realise that. there are things that are just worth too much to run away from at this point.... im sure you know what i mean. so thank you babe *hugs you soooo tight* ive missed you, we'll have to talk again soon :)
-love'n'hugs ant
 
now THAT is freaky...
remember how in "cafe and coffee talk" you were saying that you and i have such similar lives?
Here we are both writing about finding new love (just a minute apart)... i'm so happy for us :)
I'd left my emotions on the cutting room floor
In that hasty editing process we call
Healing.
this was brilliant writing,
and my favorite line:
Ignore that lie (there's so much more to remember)
Erase that moment (it will only make you cry).
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Originally posted by Queen Beat:
Feet tangled in bed
Hearts tangled in time
You have the gentlest eyes of anyone I've seen
And yet they cut through me so easily.
I love that.
You whisper thoughts in my ear
And I can feel that you mean it
You know that I need it
And I want you to take it.
The heat rises and sweat starts to slide...
Maybe one day you'll know how much I love you.
mmmmmm.... i am sooo feeling this. for real, that is beautiful, and what a feeling...feet one feet.
i love it too.
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Not very often, do i read a post in here that touches me to the point of tears, today you did.
I'd left my emotions on the cutting room floor
In that hasty editing process we call
Healing.
Forget that hour (if you want to get through today)
Ignore that lie (there's so much more to remember)
Erase that moment (it will only make you cry).
I still trying to recover from that
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'Bout fucking time you wrote something, you lazy bitch. ;)
*huge huggles*
Anyway, I'm all joy your life's worked out so well, and if its producing poetry this good, then I'm definately all for it.
:)
-plaz out-
 
^ ^ ^ Hey I wasn't being lazy! Just lost the urge to post.
Harraser: I miss you too.... you always untangled the twists and turns I created in my mind. I hope you're ready for everything that lies in store for you. :)
Sweetpea: I did write this from the heart, but it's really hard to describe happiness - much harder then describing pain. I just wanted him to know how much he means to me.
 
Nice one. It's so damned hard to write anything that sounds sincere when one is happy, but you my dear have captured it perfectly. I really hope that all goes well for you. Everyone deserves happiness in their lives... :)
 
You make me feel like I'm someone special. You make it seem, through all the burdens and madness of my daily life, as if tomorrow is going to be worth the labour of today.
You're everything to me.
I love you.
 
Well, what you wrote originally had me, and ^^^^ that just drove me over the edge. Thank you both. And always take a moment to realize how much beauty affects people - and this love of yours is quite lovely. :)
Thank you.
 
apollo: I guess you do already know, I guess I don't have to wait for that elusive one day, I guess you actually understood all along.... I love you too.
 
Dags: Its beautiful until you have to live with em. They burp at each other in real life. ;)
Bollocks to 'we', I am still reserving the right to be a manic depressive son of a bitch when I feel like it. :\
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-plaz out-
[ 25 November 2002: Message edited by: plazma ]
 
^^^^
yes... but, I think they're beautiful anyway :)
You guys are amazing.
I love being around you, learning from you and appreciating the happiness that we all seem to be wallowing in :)
 
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