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Adikkal

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yo, this is well... somethin thats givin me the shits, channelled into a rhyme...

thrown off by the prospect of something occurring
i down a few more now my vision is blurring
get a word in? narr, conversation doesnt matter
only gettin this attention from my status as a rapper
I aint used to it and im not sure how to play it
not the forward type of guy i find it hard to deny
my gut instinct, maybe i should just stop thinking
start acting in a fashion thatd get me some more action

think more with my dick and less with my head
instead i opt for conversation document it with the lead
pencil, when i get home im alone
left wonderin if i will ever use this microphone
to get my kicks from the chicks with the big tits
and the pierced clits who witness me rip this with slickness
hit n miss once again it was there for the taking
i know what she wants so why the fuck am i shaking?
quaking the earth on tha scale of richter
whys this morality still paintin the picture
of frustration,

next time, i tell myself, i'll do it right
flip my eyes in my head to gain some insight
though i know whats wrong it aint a matter of that
it be a matter of change and thats a matter of fact

so what do i do? how exactly should i go about this
process of change to eliminate the doubt with-
in my mind and the element of hesitant behaviour
embrace a new flavour and bow to the saviour
of satisfaction on a level of tha physical
i prefer the higher level synergistic with the spiritual
its pitiful the way some people never reach down into the soul,
never makin themselves whole, so surrender control

thats a goal to achieve in your life contextual
find a balance of the sexual and intellectual

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so yeah... thats, something. Let us know what u think, lyrically and topically . cheers peeps

Adikkal
 
Admittedly, my assessment of your work is going to be somewhat biased, but I'll do my best.

hit n miss once again it was there for the taking
i know what she wants so why the fuck am i shaking?
quaking the earth on tha scale of richter
whys this morality still paintin the picture
of frustration,
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Damn dude, the kind of question only you can answer. I can understand where you're coming from. Though, perhaps it would be pertainent to consider morality as being secondary to ethics? I'm not sure, as I said.

Having read and re-read this one, I'm loathe to apply a catchy little tag to your work, but I'm going to fall foul of that particular curse and say that I would call this "Thinking Man's Rap".

A very tidy piece, on a very important personal dilemma. :)

-plaz out-
 
=D i know exactly where you're coming from. been there far too often. all i can say is it will come. usually just after you give up hope and stop looking. it's a sad state of affairs, but appeasing the heart is often far more important than satisfying the body. and the 'microphone' will get a workout one day, never fear. enjoy :) !!


ps. in my experience, big tits and a tight bod are no substitute for a qiuck mind and a generous heart. sometimes they come as a package, but not very often. stick to your guns.
 
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cheers fellas..

I appreciate the feedback guys =)

The 'micropphone' was actually meant as a microphone, no double meanings! Heh, but now i see that works too =)

Yeh fluffy, its not so much i'm looking for a soulmate or anything like that (that is to say not ONLY wanting somethin like that), but throughout my adolescence i guess ive never really been that 'pick up chicks' type of guy so i'm not used to how to play it, actually getting attention and talkin in the 1st place is fine, but yeh, theres this level where things just get, well harder to deal with... and i think that happens if i realise the prospective 'target' isn't exactly on the same wavelength and i realise the shallow nature of things. This is what gets to me.

I guess mainly its just kinda hard after experiencing 'true love', you realise that alot of the relations between people are entirely trivial and you yearn for that deeper meaning...

But hey, i recognise this.. but as i said

"i know whats wrong it aint a matter of that, it be a matter of change and thats a matter fo fact"

Adikkal
 
most excellent!
On one hand you know you should be gettin with these super hot chicks, because hey they are super hot chicks, but on the other that's all they really are, no substance (and though it may seem weird that you as a young guy are even caring about whats past those big tits and bleach blonde hair, it is'int, it's an excellent thing in my opinon and shows you have some self worth).

Nice job
 
Yeah that was a really good piece dude... it was definately written with a lot more intellect than a lot of other "rap rhymes" i have read. keep it up and if u have the live talent and good management u should do well.

id def like to see you ripping it up live since i have not yet seen your skills! only shoelace :)

topically... do u really WANT the whole shallow thing? sometimes i think its better to just steer clear and wait for that connection- imho thats way better than just meaningless physical stuff to satisfy only physical needs. u will always be able to tell the people who are after you for that reason... its pretty obvious when it happens.
 
Nice work again, Adge.

I think one thing that sets u apart as a rapper is your ability to document your thoughts in such an articulate manner, at the same time with such rhythm and cool rhyming.

Wordy and intellectual, yet tight and swingin'.
 
Taliana - Yeah, ya see thats probably the issue... If i really wanted to get with these chicks on a shallow level i would be, essentially it comes down to the fact that i acknowledge the lack of depth and it creates an obstacle. I guess the confusion occurs when i compare myself to the typical 'male' thing, like if a chick that wants u physically then fucken go for it!!! Guess im just a soft cock ;) heh,
EH, Its the way i am, interested in more than just simple physical gratification. The desire to change my ways comes from a sense of missed opportunities and sexual frustration, but when it comes down to it, i like how i am :)

Punch - "Wordy and intellectual, yet tight and swinging"
That is one dope description right there man :) I'm gonna remember that, and quote you or something like they do on movie covers
"The craziest thrill ride of the summer! - Film Bullshit Review"

heh, WOOt i say :)

Ohh yeah, and tali, you WILL see me rap live one day no doubt about it - hopefully someday soon.... my passion for music grows everyday, i can't wait to create music of a standard im happy with so i can share it with people, and hopefully have an influence in their lives. THAT is the reason i make music, to hopefully someday create music that will affect people like music has affected me

Peace

Adikkal
 
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