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Dagny

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Hear me, see me, feel me, fuck me,
crave me, hate me, need me, leave me,
ravage me, bleed me, fear me, heed me.
What do all these have in common?
Act, if you breathe,
speak, if you be,
revolve around my peace of mind,
for this world holds nothing for me
outside of the weakness in my knees -
that catch in my throat -
and the un-repressible animal urge I feel
every time I see the lines of your muscles
in your shirt sleeve.
Genius, they've said about me,
but I've been reduced to a whim
that you only need utter,
and I will let forth a primal scream
that could frighten a preacher from his vows.
I beg you to tame me,
put an end to this hunger and stifle this need
that I've become.
 
not much to say that hasnt alreaddy been said.....you truly are BRILIANT!!
primal and raw and evers so honest.....this is what I love about your poem.
 
the only thing not absolutely wonderful about this is that i didn't read it sooner :)
you rock hun!
Mella
 
Someone needs to invent a few more terms of praise, since we've run out of ones to apply to pieces like this....
 
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