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hiroshi

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You came around when i least expected....
And i let my guard down.
Your words broke down my barriers..
And then you ran around..
I should have spoken right there..
But my shyness got me again..
Strike 3 for dopey.. now he's outa there..
2 weeks later.. the beginning of fun
you made me feel special.. as no one had done.
It looked like a second chance.. to change what i had done..
And that was not speak my mind when it shoulda been done
But its my fault that i dropped my guard.
And allowed myself to love..
I caused alot of grief.. for all of those around..
My constant nagging.. wore their patience down..
Then comes the day..
after a wonderful night of dancing.. that really brightened my day..
But I knew it was too good to be true..
As my mood is never this good...
I made it to the club.. only 1 person there i knew...
I begin to call around.. to find where everyone went..
I get invited over. .if only to just say "hey"
I get there expecting a hug.....
not bedsprings bangin away..
I should have seen it coming..
infact i know i did..
everyone else warned me..
But i just had to try..
now i wish i had listened..
Because now I want to cry...
that i finally opened my heart again..
and alls i can do is sigh...
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I probably bastardised and broke every fundamental rule of poetry that there is.. and to those who grace this forum with remarkable works day in and day out.. I apologize for it.. but none the less these are my words.. And i just wanted to share them with those that know me here..
Ill be fine though =)
and mellabopper..
Thanks for a wonderful night.. You really cheared me up from the start
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[This message has been edited by hiroshi (edited 22 July 2001).]
 
la dee da da da da dee da werk it!
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ah crap Hiro
hey there is a orgy on the 15 or 16th
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$15 to get in - limited to 35 people 2 DJ's on a house system and plenty of crazy licking and sticking
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I got a cute date from Ohio for that event: Remember Kathy? - she doesn't go to parties anymore but her other friend does - she invited me (dayum hot gurl!)
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OMG...this hit home...WOW...This is just ewxactly what I needed right now. This happened to me w/my first love...I seen him at a party..you could not seperate us all night...I felt like everyting was finally in place...life was perfect again...but I was to blind to see I was wrong. And today I am going out with him..trying to build my gaurd...*Protect my heart* ..I just dont know if I am strong enough.
I know how you feel...I feel it to.
Jen~
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glad you liked it.. unfortunately i wish i didnt have to write it. but hey... im bout to lose a friend cuz of this which i dont want to do.. hopefully we can fix things after work
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well kev, we will talk later......and we have in the past about this subject, so i really do not want to go into detail here.....but it was a amazing poem..
and aja...hmmmm ..you are going to an orgy and not inviteing me, say what!!!!!!...j/k
casper
 
first off - ::hugs to kevin::
second - there are no rules to poetry :P
i'm sorry you had to go through some shitty times with certain people
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but i'm glad you had fun at the party, i had a lot of fun, too :P
Mella
 
>shameless bump<
Wow.. I was shocked as hell that i actually wrote that when i wrote that.. and to look back on it a few days later.. Its kinda a mind trip... more shocking enough is i didnt turn tail and run after the shit hit the fan shortly after i had origionally wrote this.. As i usually avoid confrontations at all costs.. (hey im a pisces :p ) Maybe im a bit more 'grown up' then i thought i was
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I almost lost a friendship this week with a person more important to me then my own family... although some major life-changing events have transpired from this.. (and not in a good way) Ill be damned though if they're gunna get in my way.
for she has been my closest friend lately..
and im gunna make damn sure nothing gets in my way of keeping it that way..
 
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umm yeah?
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friends don't let friends break drywall during sex
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(umm yeah?)
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Glad you're doing better Hiro - thought you ran off into the jungle or sumptin'
 
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