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Love’s Attempt to Heal

Crow

Crow

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Love’s Attempt to Heal 2/10/01
**Love walks in**
Get the hell out of my mind!
Don’t make me do it again.
Don’t make me crouch over
Hands cupping my ears
Eyes shut
Tears squeezing out
Jaw clenching
Grunting to muffle the screams as they are released…
You want to fix me?
Go ahead, fix me
You’ll need more than a staple gun and glue to put it back together, you know.
You just can’t do a patch job and leave.
It can’t hold together anymore.
There is little in there.
Only speckles of what used to be,
My former self, you know – that guy…
Thought he had it…found what everyone dreams of…
What all the books and philosophers talk of…
Fireworks in the sky, whoohoo, what a myth that was –
You still remember that day?
Or did you forget.
All the banter she spoke.
Those kiddie pool shallow promises
Friends?
Oh yeah
Anything said till you left.
So much bullshit to not strip away all the hope you had,
Have you ever heard to St. Jude?
He’s the patron saint of lost causes.
Lost cause is right.
Wasting time, energy and space for that “feeling” you wanted,
See where it got you?
The fetal distress of your consciousness,
Spiral bouts of vertigo.
Such a futile course – wasted breathe.
So go, keep your tools in the box
Don’t start
Leave me be,
I’ve learned my lesson
I’m much better off hollow…
**Love walks out**
 
I hate it when people post to someones work like this, but,...
Dayum, that was good Crow! I feel for you, and I feel your words, deep down. Been there. I'm sure I'll be there again someday.
Just remember this, none of us make it through this thing called life without gettin a few holes punched in our souls... we all have our dents and scratches,... and some of us have a lot of "rust". Pain tends to do that...
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It's not until you've lost everything that your free to do anything.
 
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very good, although i hate to think of people having to go through thoughts like this...i remember being there, and it's definitely not an easy path...and it seems all you gain from the experience is a jaded view of the world and mistrust for all things that seem like happiness..
 
crow, holy shit!!! this is a fucking great piece! honestly (no offense) as i was reading i thought you got it from somewhere else or something, like a song? who knows... but shit you wrote this? daaaaaaaaamn
good work hun
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Mellabopper
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animals are for petting!
"does anyone know where we are? because i think i dont have a clue"
"damn the man, save the empire!" - empire records
Corruption is key.
 
im agreeing w/ fizzy girl "it seems all you gain from the experience is a jaded view of the world and mistrust for all things that seem like happiness.." great great piece. life isnt life till youve had your heart super glued together a few dozen times.
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"Most ravers are either high-tech holograms created by evil promoters to make it look like there's a lot of people at the party, or Satan in one of his many disguises."
 
He's saying what were all thinking!
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Yes I can relate, Have I learned? Thats debatable.
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All men die. But do all men really live?
 
While I was reading this, I felt some semi-healed wounds ripping open. Ouch! Although this was painful for me to read, I think that it is excellent.
 
just doin that crazy thing i do sometimes (lookin through the old posts in words and bumpin a few up)
i though this one should be shared with everyone who hasnt read it (yet). definitely one of my favorites
Mella
 
Those kiddie pool shallow promises
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you have such a way with words
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E-girl
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"...there are 2 paths, you can go back, but in the long run... there's still time to change the road you're on..."
 
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