lost lyric

[cossack]

few words
crashes a man's
life. a short time
to sing a sad song,
to feel it.
through you
Apart of us
is something chilling,
but then, all silence
all it lost
all was here but not meant to be
lyric disappears
this song floats up into the mist
of the forgotten
[ 03 July 2002: Message edited by: cossack ]

 

[spinkle]

tight, man. seriously

 

[cossack]

^^^
thanks, it was an intense moment

 

[harraser]

I really really liked reading this, it made me think of one of my favorite sculptures, funnily enough called "lost tune", which is of an old and withered hand that looks like its trying to hold a chord on a guitar, and coupled with the title it made me picture a really old man who, when he was younger, while playing his guitar late one night, discovered the perfect song. but when he woke up the next morning he'd forgotten it and he spent the rest of his life trying to find that one lost tune coz it was just so perfect.its kinda sad but beautiful as well coz of the devotion my imaginary man put in. *shrugs* well thats what my mind does when I see a peice of art that I think is really spectacular. and this peice had the same effect on me. it was wonderful. thank you

 

[cossack]

edit: drunk talk, so I will just say this,
thanks harraser I could have not said it better. That is the pefect way to picture it. Thank you! :D
[ 08 July 2002: Message edited by: cossack ]
[ 08 July 2002: Message edited by: cossack ]