lost love shite

[RaspberrySwirl]

you've left the room
the air follows you as you exit.
the sound of a door closing
it's the feeling of a chest concave
after a long sigh
that i meant.
to hold back
a piece that is missing
a whispered word,
love. that is missing.
i think you only find it
inside me
but it's just a piece of me
even though you leave me out of breath
it dosent fill me up
leaving the space more empty
like lips cracked from incessant licking
trying in vain to heal the wound
just making it worse
and what can i say?
you have a way of making everything
i say
untrue.
run, run girl
he's gotten the best of you
alone, alone again
i've got something to learn
that's obvious to me now
thanks for the lesson. though
it's one more broken heart
i coulda done without
maybe this girl is finally
wise'n up
and i won't
have anymore of this lost love crap
to write, it'd be nice
love's a homeless guy
i gave me money to
who turned around
and spent it
on a 40 of colt

 

[up all night]

You have a way with words that i really love.

 

[Noodle]

I know a single word doesn't really describe what this piece stirred in me but I'd just like to exclaim it anyway;
ROCK!

 

[Angelight]

wowzers
this was excellent
Thanks so much for sharing

 

[RaspberrySwirl]

thanks to everyone who responds to my feelings that are the picture, the words which are the frame. it is nice just to know that someone is reading , i never know what to think of these ponderings myself...