Lives of lies

[Along For The Ride]

Living and lying, trusting and crying
Lives of peasant, eventually dying
For a new fear, will rise up again
Destroying all lives and good hearts within
Living while dying, time running out
Trying my hardest, complimented with doubt
No one believes in my serious ways
Making "Yes" an easy thing to say
Continuous lying defeats the truth
I won't need a hand when tying the noose
I've left myself here, to hang on a tree
Hoping for saviour as my heart still bleeds
But never again, if I don't take this chance
Will I stand on my own, in my own battle stance
Hoping and praying and finding a way
Pulling together for my final day

 

[Mary Poppins]

ahhh this poem flows over you so lyrically, the rhythm is quite hypnotic!

a tight piece, well written.

 

[cherub]

perfect bit there,,, flowed nicely and slowly build up feelings about the piece,, nice work

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Well worded, yes very tight!

But never again, if I don't take this chance
Will I stand on my own, in my own battle stance

 

[RareForm]

sometimes, rhyming is just refreshing. this is one of those times.