Lip syncing a sorry for my shooting star

[mini sari]

Smoking a stale vanilla sweet dream under the crisp silk sky and silver stars
This used to be our spot, This should have been our moment
I can't help but wonder, Are you kissing the same sweet air as I?
Lips that once were here caressing mine, Now sealed with hate lying behind them
Why not speak your words, Why hold back how your heart really feels?
Our ecstasy lasted for only moments, But the rage has been brewing for what seems to have lasted a lifetime
I can see it behind those baby blues that sparkle like the finest diamonds from the heavens
You no longer feel how I still do, Perhaps you never truly did
Express this song of anger that your heart sings, Make me understand why you want me gone
Don't leave me standing here alone tonight without closure, All it can do is cause more problems
This soap opera was once a story book romance, Why does your smile no longer sparkle at the sight of mine?
I still love you, I always will. Just make me understand why things changed so suddenly.
I know I wasn't perfect, I am also aware that by hurting myself because of my weaknesses made you turn your back because it hurt too and to watch it happen.
I promise you, I didn't do any of this because you weren't good enough for me
I did it because sometimes I felt like I wasn't good enough for myself, Let alone good enough for you.
I'd give up these dreams of mine that are shooting in my crisp velvet sky like these precious stars
Just to hold you closely and tell you that I really have tried
I suppose you really do deserve better
You deserve someone who is not only beautiful
But actually feels beautiful too
God knows, Every moment I was with you I forgot about my insecurities and felt like the luckiest girl in the world, Perhaps I even felt like the most beautiful..
Those moments I spent alone I slowly killed myself just longing to be better than I was
And I didn't even see that how I was.. Was perfect for you already
I destroyed that perfection, Didn't I?
I'm sorry..

 

[E-girl]

Sometimes, the other person doesn't realize how important closure really is. That's what this piece is about, and let me tell you -- i've been there. I spent years of my life trying to CREATE closure that he didnt give me, and it took me a long time to get it, by it was on my own, with no help from him.

i love the imagery in this.... and the whole thing switches between beauty and sadness in my mind. I always thought we broke up b/c i wasn't good enough, or beautiful enough too.... the guy i'm with now makes me feel like i'm all those things, even though i think i'm not.

it seems like you probably didnt destroy this as much as you think it was all you. some boy out there just didnt know what he had.

 

[frostyangel]

Your only as strong as you allow yourself to be.. never believe that someone is better than you in any way..

You are your own person and people will like you for who you are.. even if you don't believe in yourself...

And no guy is better than you ... make sure you always have the better half.. a you and him are to make a pair.. complete a circle.. now greater or less.. even = equal and if you don't feel that way then you are not with the right person....

Be strong. You are the most important person to you.

 

[cherub]

The girls pretty much covered comments,, i just wanted to say ,, amazing piece of work and very heart felt.

Sometimes it is hard to be strong when you don't want to be but you have to ,,, to move on.