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xXxChaosKittyxXx

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So now, little girl, you've grown tired of grass
LSD, goofballs, cocaine and hash,
and someone, pretending to be a true friend,
said, "I'll introduce you to Miss Heroin."

Well honey, before you start fooling with me,
just let me inform you of how it will be.

For I will seduce you and make you my slave,
I've sent men much stronger than a girl like you to their graves.
You think you could never become a disgrace,
and end up addicted to Poppy seed waste.

So you'll start inhaling me one afternoon,
you'll take me into your arms very soon.
And once I've entered deep down in your veins,
The craving will nearly drive you insane.

You'll swindle your mother and just for a buck.
You'll turn into something vile and corrupt.
You'll mug and you'll steal for my narcotic charm,
and feel contentment when I'm in your arms.

The day, when you realize the monster you've grown,
you'll solemnly swear to leave me alone.
If you think you've got that mystical knack,
then sweetie, just try getting me off your back.

The vomit, the cramps, your gut tied in knots.
The jangling nerves screaming for one more shot.
The hot chills and cold sweats, withdrawal pains,
can only be saved by my little white grains.

There's no other way, and there's no need to look,
for deep down inside you know you are hooked.
You'll desperately run to the pushers and then,
you'll welcome me back to your arms once again.

And you will return just as I foretold!
I know that you'll give me your body and soul.
You'll give up your morals, your conscience, your heart.
And you will be mine until, "Death Do Us Part" copyright~2000(g.s)
 
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xXxChaosKittyxXx said:

And you will return just as I foretold!
I know that you'll give me your body and soul.
You'll give up your morals, your conscience, your heart.
And you will be mine until, "Death Do Us Part" copyright~2000(g.s)
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this section here...so powerful and enticing...kinda makes me think of a sinister person standing at the door and opening it just before someone gets there...and saying...i knew youd come back...

another great peice =D
 
They way you interpret my writing is exactly how i want it to e. Its exactly how i am picturing it in my head as i write. Star...do you write?? You have a way with words and putting the right adjectives in your sentences to add more depth and feeling.
 
i do write...when i have a chance to and feel like it. i am very slowly writting a story with a seductive character in it whos life revolves round seduction and entrapment :) when its finished i willpost it...but until then its only lil snippets i put in here eg the poems from it.
 
i would love to read it when you are all done!!! Please PM it to me, i like reading more in depth things in less personal forums. I would also love it if you would pm me one of your writings if you would like too.
 
this was powerful too.
also, if you want to read writings someone posted, you can do a search (in words, if that what you want to read only) and everything they posted comes up.
 
xXxChaosKittyxXx said:
They way you interpret my writing is exactly how i want it to e.
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When exactly did you write this? ANd by when, i mean, which year...?

I find the copyright 2000 thing interesting, that is all...
 
Marriage Creed BY: Aaron Parker

So now, Little Man, you've grown tired of grass,
L.S.D, goof balls, cocaine, and hash;
And someone, pretending to be a true friend,
Said, "I'll introduce you to Miss Heroin."

Well, honey, before you start fooling with me,
Just let me inform you of how it will be.
For I will seduce you and make you my slave.
I've sent men much stronger than you to their graves.

You think you could never become a disgrace
And end up addicted to poppy seed waste.
So you'll start inhaling me one afternoon;
You'll take me into your arms very soon.

And once I have entered deep down in your veins,
The craving will nearly drive you insane.
You'll need lots of money (as you have been told);
For darling, I'm much more expensive than gold.

You'll swindle your mother; and just for a buck,
You'll turn into something vile and corrupt.
You'll mug and you'll steal for my narcotic charm,
And feel contentment when I'm in your arm.

The day when you realize the monster you've grown,
You'll solemnly promise to leave me alone.
If you think that you've got the mystical knack,
Then, sweetie, just try getting me off your back.

The vomit the cramps your gut tied in a knot,
The jangling nerves screaming for just one more shot-
The hot chills and cold sweat, the withdrawal pains,
Can only be saved by my little white grains.

There's no other way, and there's no need to look;
For deep down inside, you will know you're hooked.
You'll desperately run to the pusher, and then
You'll welcome me back to your arms once again.

And when you return (just as I foretold:),
I know that you'll give me your body and soul.
You'll give up your morals, your conscience, your heart,
And you will be mine until

DEATH DO US PART.

Look familiar to anyone?
 
Ive read this poem years ago on the wall at rehab, I wasn't going to say anything but...

Take Me in Your Arms
(Miss Heroin)


So now, little man, you've grown tired of grass
LSD, goofballs, cocaine and hash,
and someone, pretending to be a true friend,
said, "I'll introduce you to Miss Heroin."

Well honey, before you start fooling with me,
just let me inform you of how it will be.

For I will seduce you and make you my slave,
I've sent men much stronger than you to their graves.
You think you could never become a disgrace,
and end up addicted to Poppy seed waste.

So you'll start inhaling me one afternoon,
you'll take me into your arms very soon.
And once I've entered deep down in your veins,
The craving will nearly drive you insane.

You'll swindle your mother and just for a buck.
You'll turn into something vile and corrupt.
You'll mug and you'll steal for my narcotic charm,
and feel contentment when I'm in your arms.

The day, when you realize the monster you've grown,
you'll solemnly swear to leave me alone.
If you think you've got that mystical knack,
then sweetie, just try getting me off your back.

The vomit, the cramps, your gut tied in knots.
The jangling nerves screaming for one more shot.
The hot chills and cold sweats, withdrawal pains,
can only be saved by my little white grains.

There's no other way, and there's no need to look,
for deep down inside you know you are hooked.
You'll desperately run to the pushers and then,
you'll welcome me back to your arms once again.

And you will return just as I foretold!
I know that you'll give me your body and soul.
You'll give up your morals, your conscience, your heart.
And you will be mine until, "Death Do Us Part"

- Anonymous

NOTE:

Some say that "Miss Heroin" was written by someone who overdosed shortly afterwards. Most sources reveal that it was written many years ago by Duncan MacLaughlin, a Scottish nobleman and detective attached to the Central Drug Squad at New Scotland Yard, England. The title of the poem is "Take Me In Your Arms". It has been added to and changed over the years, and several people have claimed authorship.

http://www.wowzone.com/heroin.htm
 
blahblahblah said:
[BSome say that "Miss Heroin" was written by someone who overdosed shortly afterwards. Most sources reveal that it was written many years ago by Duncan MacLaughlin, a Scottish nobleman and detective attached to the Central Drug Squad at New Scotland Yard, England. The title of the poem is "Take Me In Your Arms". It has been added to and changed over the years, and several people have claimed authorship.

http://www.wowzone.com/heroin.htm [/B]
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Like you I've seen this poem around, thats why I posted the version I knew of - like you said, furhter investigation reveals numerous authors claiming it to be theirs - and now one on bluelight ;)
 
I just saw this and thought "Hey, i've posted this twice already on Bluelight!"... it's my favourite poem and has been for many years... although when I posted it I made note of the fact it what not my own work
and the author was unknown.
 
First of all it wasnt written by a guy who overdosed...second i have gooten most of my shit copyrighted..so how would that of been done if i took someone elses poem??? If in fact it WAS someone elses then i dunno what to say, cause i wrote it sitting in my room year 2000 and had never ever knew of it. i wouldnt post someone elses poem claiming it to be mine i dont take other peoples writings that came from their soul. i KNOW i would hate it if someone stole my shit. I apologize if it is someone elses, i wrote it on my own. Great minds think alike and i hadnt heard it prior but in my subconious who knows. delete the thread, i would hate for people to think i plagerize. That just isnt me.
 
I think this thread should be deleted before ChaosKitty embarrasses herself even more than she has in the above post.
 
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