Like the smell of putrid meat....

[harraser]

The plate pushed away in disgust.
Food long ago gone cold
And uneaten,
A once hearty appetite
Destroyed by the lingering scent of
Shit
Hanging in the air
Of the once imaculate room.

Now in your eyes
Never sleeping
Never blinking
Never straying from that picture on the wall
The room is a sty,
And oh so appropriate for its inhabitant.

Ugly
Dirty
Smelly
Stupid
SO FUCKING STUPID!!!

Your mind raceing in reverse
Going back
Scanning the past
Trying to find what caused the problems
Trying to figure out what went wrong
Trying to find the answer
To the most imediate problem of all....

Where is that smell coming from????
Its sickening...
Disgusting...
Like the smell of putrid meat
Its so bad it makes you want to gag
And its coming from
Your life.

 

[plazma]

Hey damnit, I WAS eating breakfast.
-plaz out-

 

[cherub]

One of the most harder poems i want to reply to that is for sure.
Temporary is all i have to say even that doesn't seem to be enough

love you
cin

 

[nephil]

Wow, that is really powerful. Very good work, very touching.

 

[*Cosmic Mist*]

All i can say Ant, is that when this happens, there is no point in over analyzing the past. Just accept that things are the way they are, and before you know it, you'll be over it, and moving in a fresh new direction...
Just wait it out - it sucks to feel like everything around you is putrifying while you watch, but search for peace and you will find it...
...and if you have the clarity of thought to write such a strong piece about it, then you're already halfway there.

 

[Angelight]

Ant, ths was very powerful...so very powerful. No matter how upsetting this piece is, its still so amazing, amazing b/c you are amazing, amazing b/c you are so bright and smart and lovely Amazing b/c you are great my friend.
Stay strong.
love,
ange