Life's loss of Life

[Altered_Soul9]

I remember the days were nothing matter
Where we could walk a million miles just to go nowhere
We could talk for hours on things we would forget the next day.
The life we led was so harmless we didn't even know of pain.
But.....
Now life has matured and we have tasted this malfunctioned feeling of pain.
It's bitter sweet smell has drawn us from the light
I ponder the the statements I use to make and realize how stupid I was
or maybe how intelligent.
I lived the life of many and broken the heart of dozens
Yet they move on and flourish
while I sit and decompose
I remember the days of x-tacy
I remember when I didn't matter to no one except me
I remember it being good.
forgetfulness is the downfall of maturity.

 

[RareForm]

May be the best thing you've written.

 

[Altered_Soul9]

^^I really appreciate it cuz.

 

[beanpoophead]

I remember the days were nothing matter
Where we could walk a million miles just to go nowhere
We could talk for hours on things we would forget the next day.
The life we led was so harmless we didn't even know of pain.

i reallly really like this part. it speaks to me, to my heart. i feel like im living in those days right now. except im starting to know what real pain is.

i loved it!

 

[neverwas]

I remember the days were nothing matter
Where we could walk a million miles just to go nowhere
We could talk for hours on things we would forget the next day.
The life we led was so harmless we didn't even know of pain.

*sighs*

I remember the days of x-tacy
I remember when I didn't matter to no one except me
I remember it being good.
forgetfulness is the downfall of maturity.

these two parts in particular touched me...i really like your style of writting.

 

[Altered_Soul9]

wow, my heart feels great!