Let Go

[Dekloren]

Once upon a time
A long time ago
I made an unearthly find
And it was impossible to say no
She was amazing, unique, none like any other
Pretty sure you know the kind

Three years of my short lived life
I was truely happy, truely in love
Love is blind, could this be my future wife?
Smiles, laughs, understanding, and the buterflies
The feelings started to explode
And it was time to say my goodbyes

I could live without it, but I didn't want to
This was something way to true
A new meaning of spiral came into play
I got caught in that spiral the very same day
Part of me wanted out, most of me wanted it back
The begining of loniliness, fill the bowl and pack

Endless thought loops
Depressed and alone
Demonic and evil moods
Why did this have to happen so soon?
They won't go away
Please help me stay

It's so hard to let go
I don't wanna let go
I want you back
I need you back
But I know, you're not coming back

How do I cope?
With a little bit of that weed smoke
Is it running away?
Or am I just trying to fly straight?
Anyways, it doesn't matter
I'm gonna live my life
Even if it's shattered
And leave the pieces of you, scattered
The sad part is, there's still hope.

 

[neverwas]

How do I cope?
With a little bit of that weed smoke
Is it running away?
Or am I just trying to fly straight?
Anyways, it doesn't matter
I'm gonna live my life
Even if it's shattered
And leave the pieces of you, scattered
The sad part is, there's still hope.

i think u answered your own question hun *hugs*

letting go and moving on isnt easy for anyone, and theres certianly no method on how to do it. i love the way u have used raw feelings in this and the use of questioing.

nicely written.

 

[cherub]

I love that last line,, the whole poem is honest with sweet words attached.

But there is always hope,,, it is never a sad thing

 

[BREAKaBEAT]

This is stunning. The last line... wow...

 

[E-girl]

this reminded me of that Hoobastank song "Running Away." I don't know why.

The heart never forgets.

 

[RareForm]

i think everyone can someone relate to this poem...having that one love and getting used to them and then suddenly it's over and you're "routine" is broken and that shit hurts for real...it's like you don't know what to do...which way to go..very raw and original poem..

 

[Firecrotch]

Sometimes having hope is the sad part. Sometimes I used to question why I still hoped something might change and just have my fortunes change over night. And maybe the world would make sense again, but while I was waiting, Im letting my life pass me by. Im not saying hope doesnt worth in more than one way, hope is often helpful and drives us to overcome. But I have found ther more I hope for things, the more disappointment that seems to come with those dreams. sorry, didnt mean to sound sulky