last train to wonderland

[vurtomatic]

mind the gap you are now boarding
last train to wonderland (where smart
people hang, like designer statements
from a modern art museum) mind the gap
doors closing (they open without warning,
into the gap of sunless lands)

shaped like a sculpture
fitted like hand-stitched in madrid
tasted like rolled in okinawa
last train to wonderland (doors closing)

who can give you a fair deal with better value
who can get you closer to your favourite stars
who can sell you dreams for so little more
last train to wonderland (mind the gap)

a woman stood huddled and wearied
tired soul she was in her gap
a man leans back relaxed and wearied
tired soul he was in his gap

soulless machines, smile

smile, courtesy brightens up your journey
smile, affordable chic everyday
smile, how did the dinosaurs become extinct
smile SMile sMIle SmiLE SMILE smile
smile, because she did

do you dare otherwise

have a heart that never hardens
a temper that never tries
a touch that never hurts
thot of the day, tune in tomorrow
for more (doors closing)

mind the gap you are now approaching
never never land (where the sun doesnt shine
sheep dream of being androids) mind the gap
doors closing (they open in your dreams,

into the soulless lands, the sunless lands

last train to wonderland

 

[Tech as heck]

:D thats cooool . it reminds me of this lil jungle dj comedy bit this guy talks and says ''mind the gap'' and '' stand clear of the doors please''
its great !
I like the piece

 

[bisKi]

smile, courtesy brightens up your journey
smile, affordable chic everyday
smile, how did the dinosaurs become extinct
smile SMile sMIle SmiLE SMILE smile
smile, because she did

those ads were a little cheesy. nice work.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

I love the way this feels - well done!

 

[.dR spgeddi]

smile, because she did

that and the rest of it made me smile.
great use of the licence
great use of juxtoposition
and sensational timing.

 

[syntech]

wow thats good.

i dont know why but it made me think of The Dark Tower by Stephen King. totally unrelated i'm sure, but thats hella good. well done