Killed by an Angel

[Altered_Soul9]

My Angel...
Left me this very day.
In a pile of lies of false feelings.

I speak of a neverending game.
Played out within the mind
With players of fabrication.

I have evolved into a pool of foolish rambling.
Saying things I know I can stand by.
Yet through all I say she turns her head.
And laughs within her cries.

A fearful look crosses her face
As the hour has dawned upon us.
I cover my eyes from the heat.
As the mouth has been revealed.

Yet she remains still
Calm only in between sobs.
For my love has never met fear.
Yet it will be killed here tonight.

I cut My Angels wings
In hopes that she would never fly away.
She grew them back
Stronger than before
And left me here this very day.
She voids my life and hurts my soul
Living only to forget
Dying only to feel relief.

My Angel's halo strikes me as it falls from her head.......

 

[faceless_shadow]

nice work man! One of my favorites

 

[Pantomime7]

Great piece. Why havent you shared it yet? Anyway, keep posting stuff; it's all great.

 

[cherub]

This is such a sad sad piece but yet very smooth in it's flow.
well written as always

strength of one self is such a balance we all seek!

 

[neverwas]

I cut My Angels wings
In hopes that she would never fly away.
She grew them back
Stronger than before
And left me here this very day.
She voids my life and hurts my soul
Living only to forget
Dying only to feel relief.

My Angel's halo strikes me as it falls from her head.......

this is so sad

 

[RareForm]

this is a great poem...I haven't seen it before....