just a poem

[Outsider]

Meant to be, but doomed from the begining.
over before it began...
yet never fully ending.
Gone are the moments of the past,
but has the future yet begun?
Standing still in time;
Frozen, in a state of neither past nor future.
The beginning of the the end...or the end of the beginning?
please respond and tell me what you think. thanks

 

[CyaLuvyaBye]

i think ive been there no exactly wat ya mean
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i thought it was you i needed nevertheless i have learnt thru the pain i needed me

 

[RaVeN_pkfl]

well that just about said it. Kinda wierd to know other people are feeling the same. This is yet another of the poems that help me figure out how I'm feeling and whats going on in my messed up little world.

 

[ChEmKiD]

wh0rd
i juss found this board
and thought id post one of mah poems

k here goes
I once was
but now i'm lost
I live the life
i've paid the cost
I'm not a fiend
but that's just it
Come on please
just one more hit
I've had my fun
still want to go
I can't stop now
i can't say no
Why stop now, I
don't know if i could
Why stop now
if it's all so good
I've been sucked in
can't turn back now
Not sure I want to
i wouldn't know how
Some nights were great
some others okay
I love the scene
day after day
I hear the music
what a lovely sound
There will come a day
where i must be "found"
We take over the night
joyfilled shouts of PLUR
Decked out with goodies
and others, funfur
The music is good
the music is loud
For a little cash
you'll sit on a cloud
The so-called "children"
children of the night
Yet a mere ten bux
could cause a big fight
The music is playin
the dj's kickin
To this dirty floor
my ass is stickin
Somtimes it goes fast
most times it goes slow
The actual hour
we will never know
As closing draws near
daybreak is in sight
I hate when I see
that bright morning light
I knew it would come
but i did not fear
All i could think was
i love being here
My scene has changed
before my eyes
How long until
another one dies
People are stupid
i'm sorry it's true
They ruin OUR scene
for me and for you
Why must you do this
dont you even care?
What will you do when
your scene is not there?
k, i wrote that not tooo long ago
after a party n stuff

k
L8R's
John-E Boy

 

[RaVeN_pkfl]

Why don't you post your own topic?