jay

[MiNiMoWs]

You make the sky a darkened gray
You ruin every sunny day
With every useless word you say
You validate yourself: blasé
Why can't I win the games you play
You're up, you're down, you're disarray
When you die I hope you lay
With your head on a silver tray
If I went to a church and I knelt down to pray
I'd say "Please God, take him away,
You are the one who can find a way
To break him, you made him, now throw him away"
What is it with people born on Tuesdays in May?
Or is it just this prick whose name is Jay?
~ April 13, 1991

 

[ApsychoticMind]

Soooo this cat Jay. I take it you don't like him that much. That was a phay poem Min.
Peace

 

[ApsychoticMind]

Soooo this cat Jay. I take it you don't like him that much. That was a phay poem Min.
Peace

 

[ApsychoticMind]

my pc sucks, sorry bout the double post. till tomorrow.
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[Terstyne]

Daaayyyeeeeeemmmmmmnnn...
*Speak* it sistah!
Be freeeeeee sistah.
Way ta release that negativeenahgeeee-yah.
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[E-girl]

i missed this the first time around. your words continue to captivate me.

To break him, you made him, now throw him away"
What is it with people born on Tuesdays in May?

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Find one person you can count on forever, one person you can love forever, and one person you can be with forever... and if you're lucky, it will all be the same person.
"Live for the memories."

 

[CrimsonQueen]

Amazing.
My opinion: It is angry, and somehow too much rhyming don't go with angry words, I would tone down the rhyming abit.

 

[L O V E L I F E]

I love good poems that rhyme.
If I'd have read this when you first wrote it in 1991, I couldda rapped it over some phat beats and given that other LL a run for his money.
MiNi say knock you out.