I've lost love.

[AmorRoark]

I'm not much of a poet.. just some thoughts. feel free to respond both ways...
Lost Love
I'm dwelling in the dark shroud of unreturned love
I'm stumbling across the sterile land of emptiness.
I'm surrounded with a thousand of your shattered promises.
I'm drowning in the burning liquid under blinding neon lights.
I'm dying with a million decaying, shredded hearts..... I'm not alone.

 

[skywise]

i think its a great poem! really sad, but very well done.