Its a beautiful day..

[SillyBat]

You looked the other way
pretended you didn't see me
It was raining and everything looked blue
cold wind mixed with noise was everywhere
you disappeared running into the crowd
its gonna be a beautiful day

I forgot where I was going
all look the same this time of hour
lost the last bus and had no money
better start walking I thought
I was thinking of you all that time
its gonna be a beautiful day

The house was empty without you
Looked at the empty table
your keys were not there
The television was just a box
i tried to understand the news
Its gonna be a beautiful day

The bed was too big tonight
i needed noise to cover my thoughts
Better go for a night walk
The roads were empty, leafs only dancing
We used to walk together these roads
Its gonna be a beautiful day

Big buildings containing small houses
I thought I ll go to the roof
watch the city lights and laugh
Went to the edge and closed my eyes
I smiled as I jumped far from it
Its gonna be a beautiful day

I pictured you in my mind
Your smile made me so calm and warm
Time to go to sleep I thought
Tomorrow I will not be here to trouble you
Tomorrow I will not have to think about you
Its gonna be a beautiful day

 

[neverwas]

I pictured you in my mind
Your smile made me so calm and warm
Time to go to sleep I thought

this had a song feel to it i especailly liked this section here...im one who cant sleep alone cause of nightmares and stuff and it just reminded me of someone specail in my life

thanx

 

[E-girl]

the only word i can think to describe this is "bittersweet."
sad, but beautiful.

 

[Cosmic Mist]

sends shivers up my spine... i know how that feels - to miss someone and know that you cannot get them back, no mtter how much you want them.

Nice stuff.

 

[SillyBat]

starfalls69 glad u liked it. Yes this poem has a nice flow init so it could be a song

E-girl thats exactly why i like this poem so much. Its very controversial and gives the read a sad but also happy feeling since the main character commits suicide but feels happy about it since it will solve his problem in a way.. Thank you for the kind words!

Cosmic Mist that feeling is mostly describing most of my poems. I do not do it intentionally but i guess past always hunts you.. Nice to hear you liked it.

At first.. i hesitated about posting here. But with these responses i am sure i will post more of my poems here!