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Is This What I Wanted?

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i waited awhile to post this. heh.
Head down.
Am I there yet?
And the drive always seems
So much shorter the way home
Eyes wide open
But barely awake
Do you think it would've been better?
Do you think?
And maybe we would be
Asking the same thing
And on the other hand
Maybe it wouldn't hurt
To see a few different faces
For a change..
You know..
So why don't you say so
And slow down right now
Because we're just standing here
Saying nothing..
Going nowhere..
So what do we know?
At a faster pace
It seemed more compelling to me
I guess that's what I sold myself on
Is this what I wanted?
Back when we started..
I'm right back where I started..
Is this what I wanted?
-d
 
Very good...leaves the interpetation open and can apply to a variety of things but I can definitly relate it to a few things in my life.
 
The most painful question in the world to ask oneself.
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***KAT***
Only those who will risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go. --T.S. Eliot
AIM: LolitAEmotionaL
 
That was a great piece of writing.
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What difference do you think you can make? One single man in all this madness...?
 
nice
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"A meeting between two beings who complete one another, who are made for each other, borders already, in my opinion, on a miracle."
 
thanks for the kind words, all.
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i have to "Make the drive" again the weekend of the 27th for a party.. should be interesting.
-d
 
*BUMP*
I love this poem!
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if you found out you were dreaming, would you want to wake up?
Please don't interrupt me. That last sentence took a lot of effort to think of and now I have to think of another one.
 
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