is this how it has to be

[cloud 9]

tell him how its gonna be
dont give him hopes by saying "we"
as time flys by
he looks to the sky
thinking of how your good to him
hoping that it wont get dim
love is his dream that he cant let end
knowing that it wont bend
he'll either love forever or not all
tossing and turning as he starts to fall
in love that is
because this dream of his
reminds him so
how she cant know
but looking into her deep green eyes
opens up his beautiful skys
and now he dies
so she starts to cry
as he fades away
she just has to say
love was her dream and it'll never go away.
i hope it makes sense. i'm so starting to feel this whole writing thing.
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Do i really need one of these?
[This message has been edited by cloud 9 (edited 19 November 2001).]
[This message has been edited by cloud 9 (edited 19 November 2001).]

 

[ice-9]

it makes more sense than you think.
keep on writing, you'll find how much it actually helps as a release.

 

[Dagny]

Agreed. It makes wonderful sense. And you have a gift for creating wonderful imagery with your words, Cloudly. Keeps getting better and better... and it DOES help to release so much in your head. Something about seeing it in print and giving your thoughts to other people to see gives you a feeling of freedom. Keep it up sweetie!

 

[Mellabopper]

ohhh i like this one. it has a great rhythm and flow to it.

its good stuff. and like everyone else already said, writing is such a release that you cant get anywhere else.

Mella

 

[fizzygirl]

It really is great to see you posting in here...not a damn thing wrong with guys that feel their minds out enough to write about what they're thinking..

 

[FutureAeons]

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"How the fuck do you feellllll?"
AIM ~ FutureAeons

 

[RitalinGurrl]

nice

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"Maybe some other time.. Fuck you very much."

 

[femmme fatal]

bene!
aj the femme
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the extra M is for MmmMmmmm
"Hell hath no fury like that of a woman scorned"
Be Good!!!

 

[E-girl]

tell him how its gonna be
dont give him hopes by saying "we"

you're a genius. i'm looking forward to more of your writing. this was really enlightening.
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E-girl
IM: tiggersgurl2067
Find one person you can count on forever, one person you can love forever, and one person you can be with forever... and if you're lucky, it will all be the same person.
"Live for the memories."

 

[cloud 9]

thanks e-girl. but i am far from a genius.
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Do i really need one of these?

 

[PixieGirl]

Cloud, you are an amazing person and I am glad that you can express yourself with your writing. You are doing such a great job!