intoxicated

[goodnitestar]

The air was filled with silent calm radio songs, the kind you actually turn up, and blast when your sick of your favorite cd. I hate the radio. But for some reason I didnt mind it when we were together, I guess everything else was just background noise. And my thoughts ran so fierce that nothing else seemed to matter, thoughts and the sound of your silly southern comfort slips of sound. Parading around everything I could have said, but didnt want to, simple.just wanted to keep things simple
So we drank a lot of wine, abruptly interuptend by my sudden fears of what would happen next. Snuggled close to the images of remorse. Drowsy from the alchohal I kissed you goodnite, goodbye ,and hello. With the thoughts of tomarro, and the next day. Both of us seemed to be acting half our age, even when you were nearly twice mine. I didnt care, and neither did you. Knowing each other for so long, it was as ironic as ever.
***and i dont know what else to say, anyone want to finish this??? **** im going to the bar.!
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[P58]

somebody buy this girl a drink!!

 

[E-girl]

first of all, happy birthday to one of my favorite poets!
even in a drunken state, you managed to perfectly capture a feeling, and you describe it so well... i long for the ending, but it cant be something i write... you have to complete the feeling. and i'm sure i'm not the only one who'll be eagerly waiting...

 

[E-girl]

fabulous ending.

 

[Chickadee]

wow that drunken poem was simply amazing, You are very, very talented. As for my 2 cents i think it should be ended at 'next day'. But that's just me and either way i think it's awesome.

 

[katmeow]

this is actually the first day I've really sat down and read anything in words.
Loved your work....esp the change in tone from the first part to the 3rd.

 

[goodnitestar]

cant figure you out,
just yet
and im not even trying
but you want to know more
as i less
care to know
anything is to much for me
and the reason I seem so distant
is because i am
i dont want to be tied down
and the fact that i could love you
makes me want to run and hide
somehow the beauty in your touch
leaves my scares aching with suprise
hoping for nothing
wanting to ignore what might me waiting
leaving you lonely
for this is all I can fell
cold
and empty
not able to commit to your contract
shaking signature on the left
passion and kisses
are all i feel in drunken heat
without the mornings headaches
and the evenings remorse
and you still calling me amazing
as my ignorance is fleeding
my pain resides
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[GentlemanLoser]

I'm envious you're this cohessive when you're loaded.
Greatly appreciated.

 

[goodnitestar]

to anyone who thought this was personal, most was a little, but a lot of it was fictional, and not to be taken literally, sorry for the drunken misunderstandings....
peace