Inner Reflections or AbsentMinded Babble?

[Zennie]

well, i'm stoned and i basically put my pen to the page and this is what came out. i kind of like it, but then i'm still high.

Crookedly i write, wondering what dreams are aflot in my head. Speakers, bodies, skipping in puddles to the beat of my heart. I often wonder who will be alone at the end, cold, damp and used up. Do i? can i be? that one. she once was loved, bundled up in sheets and kissed until the sun came up. can you be her? spoken your words are lies. the water skimming down cheeks, soft kisses against cool skin....
[This message has been edited by Zennie (edited 03 October 2000).]
[This message has been edited by Zennie (edited 03 October 2000).]

 

[cherub]

Zennie
they may have been babbles,, but anytime you put pen to paper or fingers to the keyboard is always to get things out !
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Just takes one angel to change a life
~~~~CHERUB~~~~
Aka: Mommyhen

 

[Noodle]

I enjoyed the stream of it. The thoughts of the inner self are often ordered so. These words will leave me reflecting on good times.

 

[Angelight]

so this is why we call you a poet? you are fabulous. i miss you

love
ange

 

[CARESS]

Who ever said poems must be structured and ordered? Not me, my sweet!
Sometimes when the heart and mind speak, it's of great things and countless thoughts that run together in a beautiful stream.
This is so wonderful! I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks for a peek inside the magnificent you.
Love,
Caress