TuLong2Chu
Bluelighter
in words you can understand ...critique me...
Enough of this caring, this loving, this dream,
I mean, when you wake up it loses most of its sheen,
and luster,
I can't just go under, life strikes me with lightning so I match it with thunder.
Kaboom! By the first step out of my room,
I get a whiff of the end, as it always looms,
And the distress,
Oh! it's just the mistress, the best at her way of dealing with stress.
So much for this notion of cracking down,
All a man really wants is to be homeward bound.
With a lady,
I know it's crazy but just maybe you'd let me say your my baby.
Oh! there I go falling back into this vision of you,
A sea of luscious views, now you just have to follow me through,
and agree,
To be my first heavenly beauty sitting right there next to me.
On my crusade to the top, can't brake, won't stop.
Like a bullet through the mullet of city hall as it drops..
..Ambition,
Just lemme get this kiss in, as my soul blurs out of their pious vision...
...Of me and you, like joining honesty and truth,
My thoughts can be qeued, if you'll just say you do,
Read my hints!
Every time I have sinned is for you with this utterance and its loving tint.
Of uncertainty, but you most certainly put the hurt in me,
When you said you could never see to be with me,
Isn't it clear,
That from tear to tear my whole damn year was spent getting you here.
Just to be stompled upon like a decrepit pawn,
In a game of looking forward, but you just look beyond.
My attempt,
The most loving hit in the chest is when you just don't get...
...That when two and two is four, the sole thing I can ask for,
Is for you to see it's You I adore; so let's explore,
"Relationship",
This long awaited trip, I just don't wanna make a move without a simple tip.
Ok, I hope that finally made it clear, at least maybe even caught your ear?
Well it helped this tear in my heart because without you there,
I'm incomplete.
Just grab a seat, I just wanted to be the greatest man you would ever meet.
It'd be a treat if this feat swept you off your feet,
Because it has for me.
Enough of this caring, this loving, this dream,
I mean, when you wake up it loses most of its sheen,
and luster,
I can't just go under, life strikes me with lightning so I match it with thunder.
Kaboom! By the first step out of my room,
I get a whiff of the end, as it always looms,
And the distress,
Oh! it's just the mistress, the best at her way of dealing with stress.
So much for this notion of cracking down,
All a man really wants is to be homeward bound.
With a lady,
I know it's crazy but just maybe you'd let me say your my baby.
Oh! there I go falling back into this vision of you,
A sea of luscious views, now you just have to follow me through,
and agree,
To be my first heavenly beauty sitting right there next to me.
On my crusade to the top, can't brake, won't stop.
Like a bullet through the mullet of city hall as it drops..
..Ambition,
Just lemme get this kiss in, as my soul blurs out of their pious vision...
...Of me and you, like joining honesty and truth,
My thoughts can be qeued, if you'll just say you do,
Read my hints!
Every time I have sinned is for you with this utterance and its loving tint.
Of uncertainty, but you most certainly put the hurt in me,
When you said you could never see to be with me,
Isn't it clear,
That from tear to tear my whole damn year was spent getting you here.
Just to be stompled upon like a decrepit pawn,
In a game of looking forward, but you just look beyond.
My attempt,
The most loving hit in the chest is when you just don't get...
...That when two and two is four, the sole thing I can ask for,
Is for you to see it's You I adore; so let's explore,
"Relationship",
This long awaited trip, I just don't wanna make a move without a simple tip.
Ok, I hope that finally made it clear, at least maybe even caught your ear?
Well it helped this tear in my heart because without you there,
I'm incomplete.
Just grab a seat, I just wanted to be the greatest man you would ever meet.
It'd be a treat if this feat swept you off your feet,
Because it has for me.
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