in the span of a cigarette

[vurtomatic]

in
music throbbing
quantified mystified chunks
of sound
made solid
the
sound chasing each
other
at
the
speed
of
thought
span
the space empty
inhale
exhale
infinitesmal
quantified mystified chunks
of sound
slide into place the
space empty
of
melodies
sound pared down
to its minimal
beats short sharp
hollow basslines
atmospheric echoes
a
friend shared
minds bridged
hearts touched
a smile
a grin
in our chests
cigarette
shared
moment
in music
in time

 

[*Cosmic Mist*]

i love the feel of this, and it's different to most of the stuff that is posted here. I like it muchly.

 

[E-girl]

this was really cool -- i missed it the first time around; found it while archiving, and thought i'd bump it up for whoever else missed it.
very clever style!

 

[cherub]

Thanks e-girl, i didn't see it either
But
I like it alot very creative and very attention getting

 

[~jerox~]

:D
i was somewhere near when that moment touched.

 

[star*]

I alwayz luv ur style of writing.
So unique

 

[plazma]

I agree wholeheartedly with what Star said, vurt man, your style is completely unique and frankly I can say I've never read anything QUITE like it.
Big ups, and this is yet another fucking awesome piece of work.
-plaz out-

 

[lilygirl]

i agree with everyone, this flows very well from one thought to another and it is a very unique way to bring your ideas across.
i also like the idea that comes across, so much can happen "in the span of a cigarette"
-lil

 

[potato]

Been looking thru the oldies, everything of Vurtomatics has rocked, but this one in particular stood out. Its the kinda stuff i wish i would/could write.

 

[RareForm]

this definitely has occured amongst my compadres.

 

[Jert]

Hey! This poem is great vurtomatic.

 

[yakksoho]

This is absolutley fantastic
I'm reeling at the immense energy required to read it, it makes me think like a crazy machine and I'm flooded with emotions and thoughts
Its so well constructed, and also an origial form of composition I would say! It is wonderful.

 

[euphoria]

Ooooh! Nice!!

 

[not_broken_420]

Very original, i love it. Really makes you think.