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In another life

Doc.Jones

Bluelighter
Joined
Apr 13, 2000
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Location
Wilder, Vt., U.S.A.
I have spent hours reading your works of art. Thank you for letting me see things
through your eyes. I wanted to share something I wrote with you, and hope you will let
me know what you think of it.
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I want to thank you for being a friend
No one has ever bestowed the kindness upon me that you have.
You are my greatest inspiration,
and yet my biggest obstacle.
Your are my best friend, and at times my worst enemy.
You are my hope, and all I fear
That witch you hope for is most often what you fear the most.
I love you, and despise you in the same breath.
I long to be close to you,
yet I push you away.
you make me smile in the inside, and still tears roll down my cheeks.
Even when you are out of reach the world continues to spin;
the longing I feel grows stronger with each breath I take.
The thought that you are the only one who can silence the screams creeps into my
mind.
You appear in my dreams, and live in my thoughts.
My soul aches for you, and still my mind begs me to let go.
I can not explain these waves of emotion you seem to bring on.
I wish I could put your memory into a little box,
somewhere I was safe from the thought of you.
Somewhere I could visit it when I was feeling strong,
but your energy is too wild, and untamed.
You are pure emotion,
you are...
love.
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PLUR. Doc
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Take me as I am, and expect nothing more
 
oh my god i sooooo relate to this ahh the pleasure the pain
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i thought it was you i needed nevertheless i have learnt thru the pain i needed me
 
"If she is fire, then you must be wood" - (Paraphrasing Leonard Cohen).
I've been the fire of someone's wood, but when I finally learnt to give back, our flame was stronger than you can imagine. Be patient for love truely overcomes all. It will be worth the pain. I promise!
Luv,
-Amina
 
you know how to make people think...i enjoyed your writing immensely, it touched me.
 
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