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i'm so tired part 2

SelectionIll

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now
i look back and wonder
if any of the childish things i did
(while a child)
maybe killed the ache
just a bit
every day.
i think about all those nights spent
at the foot of a wooden stairwell,
different faces every time
but the disjointed conversation was always
the same
"You have to see, the hardkiss brothers,
this song has played four times tonight
and nobody noticed."
"I noticed."
"It's all futile. futility and hardkiss."
"You should write that down"
then i thank god i didn't. thank god i didn't
write
any of it down.
but then i have to remember those occasional good times. the kind that don't leave your soul smoking and thin, caught on the bottom of your shoe and being dragged.
there were so many parties (raves, et al) meeting so many new people in warehouses and on tennis courts.
i've seen every city in the east, just after midnight and only until sunrise, and then fly back home quick with new friends in tow.
there were so many bright and pretty girls.
six oclock in the morning, they would roll and skip and dance in the water collected in puddles in the grass.
all the jaded men you see (boys still at 19 and 20 yrs old already)
would sit on the porch in the half glow of a morning sun
and want these girls, these delicate women
who just hours before held our hands while our tops blew.
but we were frozen
frozen with a conciousness of self
that we would not show
not then.
there we would lay, in bed, not sleeping,
while every floor was breathing and clicking and popping
from rusty joints and rolling kids,
and all the boys would lay, wooden still, and reach out with our (visible now) lonely, true and vital selves,
and twist through narrow hallways, along darkened bedrooms, across dreamy sleeping faces, and pray to those sleeping angels, to see our selves,
our true and thoughtful and clean and pure desire for sweet smell of hair and just to walk up, next to our beds, and smile serenly,
and kiss our foreheads,
be kind and motherly,
and leave us to dream in the immensity of it all.
well,
i suppose that probably had something to do
with how thin i feel now, yes?
alright, i'll keep digging.
to be continued.....
[ 29 August 2002: Message edited by: SelectionIll ]
[ 30 August 2002: Message edited by: SelectionIll ]
 
Wow wow wow.
You have an absolutely amazing way with words. I can never stop reading what your write - and I really can't wait for the next installment.
Beautiful work.
 
wow, i'm overwhelmed. i am really really really glad you like it, and promise to keep writing as long as you wish.
seemore
 
but then i have to remember those occasional good times. the kind that don't leave your soul smoking and thin, caught on the bottom of your shoe and being dragged.
I'm glad that there are some people out there that are acknowledging the fact that there were good times in the past... but everyone is getting so jaded... "back in the day" i hear them say... i just want to hear someone say that they're having as much fun now as they did before... even if it is in a different way to their previous experiences...
But nice work... when the next section comes in, i'll be a'reading it! :)
 
thank you.
happiness, that is the point of this story. as it progresses, you'll see, for it is in the journey itself that we find life. all those "back in the days", those led us here. are you happy "here". I am. well enough explanations, let's leave it for the tale, yes.
seemore
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I never read anything like this! I loved it. I want to read it over and over again. This was such talent.
 
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