if you're giving in.. then ur giving up.....

[poezante]

hide what you can
deceive where you want
i see thru your fascade
thru the looking glass..
deny all you want
blame as you please
you will never ascertain the damage you have done..
upside down,
twisted, backwards,
left, right..
any which way you choose i have been ..
i will say this..
crystal,
clear,
you will never subdue me....
[This message has been edited by poezante (edited 02 October 2000).]

 

[Squirt]

damn skippy! more power to ya hun. damn the man! save the empire! NARF!
-- squirt
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"kids wouldn't be doing drugs anymore if you could fly a damn tea cup." -- lovelite
"give in to love, or live in fear." -- rent

 

[LiQwidVibeZ]

Absolutely beautiful!!! Such a short poem but it says so much keep writing.
*Jessica*

 

[strangElove]

beautiful poem!
glass?....crystal?....
c'mon poe, the minute you stop talking to me you become a tweaker? no fair!
hey i still got a better hookup anywayz...
see 'the dambuilder' for info on a good steroid hookup.

 

[strangElove]

btw there's a good song by primal scream called "give up but don't give out".....
just thought i'd let poe and her audience know.
"words like violence, break the silence..."
-martin gore (depeche mode)
"...but i'm rubber and you're glue."
-halo

 

[Noodle]

hhhhmmmmm...
interesting stuff to digest

 

[poezante]

actually the title derives from a song called "muzzle", nothing even remotely to what u are reciting..
-poe has spoken.. lol

 

[Crow]