Ibiza

[C Divinity]

Take me to where the rythem embeds itself in my soul.
Fill me up with your sweet melodic sounds and set my spirit free.
I want to be on your crowded dancefloors all night,
and I long to watch the sun rise on your beaches.
Take me to where the song never ends,
where the beat of my heart echoes the beat of this trance.
Breathe new life into my dying soul,
Give me the euphoria I crave,
Unify me with your patrons.
You are my dream;
my far off place, exotic and beautiful, magical to me.
Take me to where the rythem embeds itself in my soul,
Take me to Ibiza...
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You gotta be a bad girl in this world to be heard...

 

[seaker]

C-
Let me just say,
I know how you feel......
Only my sister is actualy there!!!
Let me say jealousy doesn't even describe my feelings...........
Keep on dreaming.......one day you'll live it.....
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Live life as it comes to you......Don't go to it and try to live. --< me
"lifes a journey not a destination." --< Aerosmith

 

[Nietzche]

Wow!!! You appear to have linked the pulsating rythem of trance music to the tribal drums of long lost cultures! Amazing . . . Also the thematic addition of unity adds a wonderful element to the poem. A truly excellent and accurate depiction of the experience of a rave! Mad props!

 

[C Divinity]

thanks so much!! im so glad there are others out there that know that burning desire i feel inside me! one day i will journey there and im sure it will inspire many more poems to come!!
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You gotta be a bad girl in this world to be heard...