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I swear to God the next time you touch my face will be the last...

Kanga

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I'm a mess of saved texts,
Cheap sex, and car wrecks.
And I'll be the first to fuck your ex.
I heard you say,
"Your heart is pieced together in shards,
next to my aloe vera plant in the windowsil.
It's made from the glass I ate,
and so it goes, I am the creator,
destroyer, and healer of your heart.
"
And so it goes,
You were the creator.
And so it went,
I was the destroyer.
And so it is,
There will be no healing here.
And so it goes...
Five years is too fucking long to be doing this.
But,
Five hours is too fucking long to not be doing this.
And remember that five pills is never enough anymore.


"If you run away," said his mother, "I will run after you, for you are my little bunny."
:(
 
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I especially like this part

You were the creator.
And so it went,
I was the destroyer.
And so it is,
There will be no healing here.
And so it goes...

the whole thing reminds me of the self absorbed shit show that relationships can turn into. well written, thanks for sharing.
 
I like it, particularly:

I'm a mess of saved texts,
Cheap sex, and car wrecks.
And I'll be the first to fuck your ex.

The only thing I don't like about it is the repitition of "And so"
You say "and so it goes..." three times in such a short piece
I realize that it's about repitition more or less, but maybe there's another way to express that aside from repeating lines cause to me it throws off the flow considerably to have "And so" written five times within the space of nine lines. i'm not saying take it out all together, but maybe reduce it a little bit?
 
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