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I Never Noticed

E-girl

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I never noticed the way you look at me,
Until someone pointed it out.
It was during a low point, when everything had be down
And I was just inadvertantly looking for some sliver of something
To put my heart right again.
I've never doubted you.... I've doubted myself plenty,
But I never once thought you could ever hurt me,
And in a world where I have gotten hurt too many times
Just having that security was somehow enough for me.
But all the while, there was so much more i took for granted.

And I know the look that she was talking about.
I saw it last night on the golf course, while we playfully fought with our clubs,
And the way you look at me when you're making fun of me for something.
I noticed it when we were watching Shrek,
And you turned to me in bed and just looked at me
With that look that I fall so fucking hard in love with over and over every day.
I'm a fool for not noticing it....
And I can't believe that I actually lay here next to you,
Naked and exhausted a few days ago after we made love,
And asked you if you loved me...
Because i said, in three years, I dont think you've ever told me
And i just wanted to know...
And you kind of looked at me with a look that said
'How couldn't you know?'
But you just said "of course."
And i think i knew that all along too, I just wanted to hear it.

You make me Glow...
When people ask me about you
And it makes me smile when someone just mentions you in passing.
I feel like i'm finally growing up,
And its nice to have someone to grow with
Emotionally, mentally....
I don't think I'll ever really appreciate enough
How fortunate I was that things turned out the way they did in my life,
And all the things that led me to you....
So now I believe in fate,
And i believe everything happened for a reason,
And it helps me live each day without regretting,
That i might have done something different.

Someday I hope you know
What it was like to dream about you
And i hope you are capable of knowing
Thats its possible for one person to love another so much
Because they are things I can never really convey to you
In a look.... like you look at me
Or in words... which have proved to be meaningless
But my heart, if you could see it....
Its whole again.
That says alot.
 
that is really gritty and bare.

it links up... strangely. Not in a bad way at all, but I like how personal every sentence is.

Thanks :)
 
^ everything she writes is so intensely personal you can't help but be drawn in.

Has it really been three years? Wow... I was reading your work way before I signed up and it's been amazing to watch the progression of your life.

I am so happy for you and I don't even know you.
 
Someday I hope you know
What it was like to dream about you
And i hope you are capable of knowing

those three lines there were the most i could ever wish for for my friends :)

theres something in your writting for us all :)

nice work hun
 
up all night said:
^ everything she writes is so intensely personal you can't help but be drawn in.

Has it really been three years? Wow... I was reading your work way before I signed up and it's been amazing to watch the progression of your life.

I am so happy for you and I don't even know you.

Amen sister. Ive been reading your work aswell for it must be three years now ... and i still jump when i see something written by E-Girl in the words forum. And i cant say how many times i have read your work and finished the poem with tears in my eyes. You're beautiful girl, and Danny is one damn lucky man to have you in his life.
 
Again I am in awe of how beautifully you write, can't help but get teary-eyed over this.

Keep keeping loves hope alive for us, thank you!
 
Girl I love you,,,,,, just cause of who you are and the way you write,,, sometimes people just need to read things to feel alittle bit better,,,, you did that. It just sometimes we forget what love really is.

Hugs
 
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