i miss you

[xpensivtaste]

i open my eyes and i see you.
the train hits me, the unbareble pain comes gushing back.
tears roll down my face
my head fills with flooding merories of us
i'm drowning
we were so happy, you were my life.
it's all gone!
i'm lost!
i think i start to find myself and you take over my dreams once more
i don't see your face but i know it's you.
you love me in that world
the way you used to,
the way i remember,
the way nobody else can.
sleep is my only escape.
i'm so tired

 

[Jabberwocky]

i think this is an interesting poem. But i am confused by a few things. The first sentence doesn't make sense to me. But throughout the poem it seems as though someone is either fading in and out of consciousness or nearing the brink of death so perhaps the first sentence was meant to be 'fuzzy'. the theme of love is a good one and i am glad to see it represented here. thanks for sharing.

 

[xpensivtaste]

sorry it was a typo. i put i open my eyes and i see is you. thankyou for your reply. i was in a dark place that day. going thru a bad time with dreams about my ex partner.
i was trying to describe how it felt dreaming about us still being together and waking up to him not being there.