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motiv311

motiv311

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i like drugs
drugs.. like I
together we love you long time

bad men ride, men on fast horses
take my precious from me

now i sad-
now i so empty-
now i wish i die.

Bad men on fast horse no fun
He laugh at me- Call me names
he stick my head in toilet :(

he say my pain, is my own fault
i no understand- that at all

Bad men on fast horse no fun.
he no give his mama hugs.
he say my pain is my own fault
cause i like drugs

no more do i wish to die
for in this cell i spend my time
counting the days till I am free

Now I Mean
Now I so Angry!
Now i cut myself and bleed..

And while my thick - red blood courses
I swear an oath of vengence against men on fast horses
 
{Khra!} Elias: O sillyold moo how i wish i where you, just eat shag poo what else is there to do.We met on the loo having a poo, ill be thinking of you when im forty two and your pooing days are through o how i loved you sillyoldmoo.

{Khra!} Elias: Sillyoldmoo he thought he was god because he caused a big flood, they where out for his blood, because he poo'd in the gutter with all the clutter flooding the street wetting all their feet.

{Khra!} Elias: All he wanted to do was eat shag poo and before he knew it he was burgers stake stew, that pore silly old moo how i miss you when i eat shag poo.
 
motiv311 i really like it :)

i like the use of lanaguage and the tone and the material

i like it cos its different to what is usually posted here :D
 
Thanks SO much you two. I am an english major, but have just started to write poetry. I wanted it to be a comedy on the surface level, but there really is more going on there (in my head anyway)

What i wanted to get across is that the speaker of the poem is obviously a naiive yet peaceful drug user - who gets persecuted by self-righteous assholes because he is a stupid junky. Yet, instead of the speaker feeling guitly while in prison- he only replaces his addiction with hatred for the "men on fast horses". Basically, the junky is to innocently stupid to know that drugs are bad and he has hurt himself; Because law-men who should know better treat him like shit because they hate him, do not understand him, or simply don't care.

Its sort of an argument for treatment and care instead of prison.
 
This is definitely different, a risk-taking piece.

Replies are interesting too. :\
 
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