I hate you

[KaideAlike44]

It's me again
The one you care nothing about
I've watched you through the years
The way you handle each situation uncomfortably
I'm growing tired of your antics
You are a self-absorbed fuck, and I hate you
Your dry sarcasm fools no one...........
It's becoming somewhat repetitive,
the way don't care about anyone or anything
You used to be so happy,
But I remember oh so well.....it did not last long
Exactly when did you change?
Was it when you thought you were nothing?....
Was it when you cared about perception?

You hide behind your own self-deprication..
If I had the guts I would take your life with limited tears...
Maybe they'll play that song.....
You know.....
Across the Universe
I would send you there.
Maybe you would get your happiness...
Aww....you're so sad...
Nobody gives a fuck!
Do you really expect for people to care about your hard times?
What hard times?
I've been through it all with you...I feel no hard times..
You are the nothing that is me.

 

[neverwas]

ouch!

ive written something similar to this a while back. its good to get all the anger and frustration out i felt better at the end of writting it to.

i can feel the anger and hate in this one sooooo well

 

[Altered_Soul9]

This poem shook me to my core. A poem filled with anger and hate. very nice.

 

[faceless_shadow]

Wow! i feel ya on this one

 

[up all night]

Ohhh I know how you feel. Although often when I'm this angry I can't write anything coherant. Nice work.

 

[PunkGrizz2005]

i understood how u feel, that's how i feel right now...

 

[KaideAlike44]

thanks for the positive feedback.

 

[E-girl]

i know someone like that.
but these were things i could only ever think in half-garbled semi-thoughts. you express it much better.

 

[Pantomime7]

I really relate to this piece. I can feel the anger in your words as if they were a sword cutting my soul. Very nice piece.

 

[cherub]

hard to comment when everyone has covered alot of it, but wanted to give you props on this,,,, it is hard to write when you are so angry and pass on the words so well as you have done. Great job!

 

[Pasilda Nacera]

Deep stuff. You must have written this through hard times and/or your a good writer.

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

bump.

 

[KaideAlike44]

^thanks for the bump :D...it's actually easier for me to write when I have a head full of emotions...