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I Hate What I See

Ataraxia

Bluelighter
Joined
Oct 3, 2001
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Location
in the depths of your imagination
I see a girl sitting alone.
With an expressionless face,
She stares at apparently nothing.
There's a distant look in her eyes
I hate what I see.
Occasionally, someone will be daring
And approach her, trying to reach her.
She'll just turn her head and looks away,
Acting as if they aren't really there.
I hate what I see.
She pushes them away so easily -
It takes no effort when you're so detached.
But as she gets up and walks away,
Tears are silently streaking her cheeks.
I hate what I see.
I fear there is nothing I can do
That could possibly change her ways.
It might not be so disturbing
If the girl I saw wasn't me.
 
She pushes them away so easily -
It takes no effort when you're so detached.
But as she gets up and walks away,
Tears are silently streaking her cheeks.
I used to get fear and apathy mixed up with detatchment as well but beleive me theyre entierly different.detachment would let you walk away from a scene without being touched by it, fear and apathy will make you turn your head but youll still feel the pain because youre not really detached.
I really liked this, it reminded me of myself not so long ago.
 
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