i got lost

[lilnellierox]

there is no satisfaction in saying how this feels
but it pours out anyway
I want to notice all the tiny stars
have them fall into my eyes
burn in the images past this place
so I no longer have to wonder
what the edge of the universe looks like
...but they are not falling
so candels will have to do...
the edge of my room will have to do...
...
I never made the connection
but I crushed her anyway.
the color drained from her eyes
bleeding out fingers
in small dots encircled in black markers
too bad the pain reflected on her face
...
heaven was whispering in my hair
wind through car windows
I pass through time that way
swirling back in cramped places
like me passing through
passing through...
if sound were a vessel
the question would no longer be where to go
thanx for the space
nellie

 

[E-girl]

this was beautiful. you have a nice way with words... i always love references to stars and heaven and wind... and you've got all 3 of these in this one. love your style!