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I don't need you now

phactor

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Go the fuck away, I don't need you anymore. I don't want you to fuck up my life again. I wasted too much time and money on you. You are nothing, yet you used to be everything. I hate how you will drop in and dominate my thoughts, your unwelcome. I made a huge fucking mistake getting involved with you, I thought I could handle you. Well you proved me wrong and I couldn't, you made your point.

What a challenge you can be to deal with. Its nice that you haven't been droping by as much lately. After getting away from you, I've found new strength in myself. I can get by without your help.... you never really helped anyways. No longer do I depend on you, no longer will I lie for you. You were cool at first but you overstayed your welcome and now its
time to say goodbye. Its over now, Were through.


[Edit] - Just so you guys know this isn't about a person.
 
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ouchys... angry angry boy ;)

nah...i realy liked this peice...the lil edit note was a good touch to...but it would of been fun to see all the paranoid readers go weird :)

very well worded and so strong. nice job.
 
I agree with starfalls, this is a great piece. may i ask what substance this is about? I am glad i never had to write a poem like this about one. I am glad you have moved on and can be by yourself.
 
Thanks guys, I'm really starting to enjoy writing and your comments make me want to keep doing it.

I wrote it about oxy, its wierd how you can percieve things especially considering OC isn't a living "thing".
 
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