i cant if i try

[Haza]

i know if i sit here and try to write a good post it wont happen...any of my thoughts that i try to explain always come out wrong, so i am not going to try on this, maybe it will come out alright
I'm 18 years old and utterly confused
I barely passed highschool, and in community college
I fall in love too easy
Getting out is much too hard
Its the little things in life that please me
a smile from a stranger
a hug from a friend
I like to be outside
but im usually to busy to appreciate it
I like a good conversation
and i love moments of silence
im a guy
and occasionaly i do cry
it bothers me when people arent nice
or when they lie
i think i have good moral judgement
but i have to practice what i preach
i like to be really corny
and enjoy long walks on the beach (heh)
i cant really tell if this is a poem
or if theyre just words that rhyme
im glad youve read this and taken the time
i think im falling for a girl
but i dont know what to do
i cant tell if shes intrested
everything she gives me the feelings, too new
i have trouble with girls
they dont like me too much
bah i gotta get to class...i dunno if im gonna post this, it was kinda dumb..
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~Why be emo and cry about her all day, when you can be metal and go to her house, kidnap her and lock her in your basement so she'll be yours forever. ~Mackey

 

[Catachreses]

hey man. i'm right there with ya. good writing, keep it up.

Ry.
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"Euphoric, narcotic, pleasantly hallucinant."

 

[madmick19]

hmmmmm.......if you added a few things, it would almost be an accurate description of me
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the consciouness of self is the greatest hinderance to the correct execution of any physical action... u dont exist therefore there are no boundaries or limits

 

[StoicPoet]

Hmm... poems don't always have to be detailed and written in a 'poetic manner', the best poems are purely emotion and flow as yours did. Excellent job.
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If I were to stab myself deep and righteously, would the flow of blood coincide with the tears in which drip from thy eyes?

 

[Mellabopper]

^^^ exactly
good stuff

Mella

 

[SexayRaverHere]

wow, very good, once again..like looking into a mirror, ur writings remind me so much of myself

 

[Noodle]

I know pieces of you through these words.
...nice piece by the way.