How he makes me feel...

[doofqueen]

To love and be love
To be everything you dream
To fear nothing but the future
But love it and be thrilled
As you embrace it

To want to leap into cold oceans
Because it’s new and refreshing
And nothing could take away
The electricity and heat
That tingles right through your core

To not harm your universe
And live with all your heart
To want to jump and know
You’ll be falling into marshmellowy
Fields of dewdrops

To make colours appear bright
And ugliness disappear
To be filled with butterflies
And be lost in thoughts
Of forever’s.....

 

[echo off]

you should really consider putting your work together and seeing about getting it published... truly, each poem of yours is distinct and original, and beautiful for it.

To want to leap into cold oceans
Because it’s new and refreshing
And nothing could take away
The electricity and heat
That tingles right through your core

this sums it up for me, great work.

 

[colicolo]

gorgeous, very cute.
i love the first verse - sets the sweetest mood

 

[doofqueen]

^^ thankyou

Echo - wow, thanks so much, that nearly brough tears to my eyes. What a lovely thing to say. I'm so "iffy" on my poetry and usually feel nothing flows right... thats lovely ... thankyou

 

[doofqueen]

*same as other bumped post*