hope

[living in solitude]

lost(i am found) but not abandoned
gone(im back) but not out just yet
for 4 years i've sped down that highway
as fast as i could
with the pedal to the floor
cruising down that dark road with no brakes
and not caring about anything
not a damn thing
until...
i picked up a beautiful hitchhiker
and upon looking into her eyes,
i saw the universe to put it lightly
words cant describe what i saw or experienced but
upon seeing that changed my life.
was that the "moment?"
im not sure of what will happen in the future
but for now, i know i have a great friend that i can count on
and talk to about anything and everything.
i can not say thank you enough for everything that you've done.
i love you.

 

[lilygirl]

awwwwwwwwwww

 

[mirabii]

I really enjoyed reading this, this piece has a lot of motion, which I felt kinda like a breeze.. and I got a really cool sense of serenity, similar to when I'm viewing something awesome like a waterfall..

 

[Hemlock]

Great expression of a moment and feeling we all hope to experience at least once in our lives. Nice work.

i saw the universe to put it lightly
Very well said.

 

[mirabii]

I forgot to say earlier, I hope she knows at least part of what you feel And I still love this. Tis good

 

[Sara Tonin]

I can totally understand a moment like the one you are describing. If you've ever had one you will never forget it Also, to remain friends with someone who has made that much of an impact on you is a wonderful thing. This was so genuine and full of heart...I loved it
[ 08 February 2002: Message edited by: Sara Tonin ]