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apocalyptic vendetta

Bluelighter
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Get yourself wrapped up in repentant situations.
Haven’t even put that thought in your best considerations.
Let’s put this under further examination.
Rest your salty head on the tabletop.
Drumming fingers make my heart stop.
Hear the repeat beeping of the phone.
I don't want to spend another night alone.
Waiting for a savior I know does not exist.
Someone who is not a neurotic narcissist.
Waiting and waiting I sit here patiently.
Painting a portrait of what I think I should be.
Fucked up thoughts of you seem to cross my mind.
These thoughts are uninvited and so undefined.
Burying the past and laying it to rest.
Apply the lip-gloss on thick when I'm getting dressed.
I am going out tonight think I will be fine.
Picture my perfect smile while I am standing in line.
Hear my own footsteps walking myself home.
I just don't want to spend another night alone.
[ 24 December 2001: Message edited by: apocalyptic vendetta ]
 
Apply the lip-gloss on thick when I'm getting dressed.
I am going out tonight think I will be fine.
Picture my perfect smile while I am standing in line.
Hear my own footsteps walking myself home.
I just don't want to spend another night alone
awesome :)
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Painting a portrait of what I think I should be.
Fucked up thoughts of you seem to cross my mind.
These thoughts are uninvited and so undefined.
Excellent use of imagery and word sounds throughout combined with a touching and personal/relevant storyline. I'm personally reluctant to use rhyming, as it usually dominates a presentation, but your work lets it slide into the background providing a pleasant rythm to the progression of images and thoughts. I loved it.
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I have to give u two thumbs up and five stars and whatever people else people use to describe how good something is. I know all to well what u r going through. I know how it feels to walk alone, be alone. It's a feeling that I think everybody feels at least once in there life. U write beautifully, u paint pictures in my head with ur words...it's awesome.
 
I cant think of words to say how good this is
Hear my own footsteps walking myself home.
I just don't want to spend another night alone.
its every night for me..... it gets hard when the night is over and you just cant sleep but theres no one there to keep you company....
lovely work
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