holding hands

[FRYED]

We hold our hands
like we never want
to let go, like we
never want the
world to end and
shatter.
but its as if
we have no more
time left and we
must savour the moment
so it will bring more
of a memory when
all is lost.
we build what we know
we will lose and hold
what we know we can't
keep
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we all need a place to go, that place is a place where love is the rule, everybody eats and stays warm. k wants to take us there, steer it to that place.

 

[D_*Lit'e']

this is really well done...did you do this as a one-time deal, or did you revise it a few times?...describes a lot to me, i really liked it.

danielle*