hmmm you can name it

[rollinginecstasy]

while searching for my mind i somehow lost track of my soul,
i gave up on my search and chose to slowly lose control,
i failed facing the present cause i never faced my past,
my last chance stopped to laugh at me then disappeared so fast,
i've pleaded with these nightmares to just fucking let me be,
my problems feel so crowded so they take it out on me,
i've searched throughout this darkness but i just can't find a light,
if i could get my head clear then i'd run away tonight,
i wish instead of following i would have learned to lead,
it's sad to feel so helpless knowing help is what i need,
i'll keep looking for something that might get me through each day,
how else can i convince myself that everythings okay.

 

[DarkPoet]

I like the feel of this, the contrast of light and dark, it speaks well of the humour of depression and things being bad, nice work

 

[Martyr's Wife]

this is really good i feel like i connect with you

 

[jaymie]

flows really, really well

it's sad to feel so helpless knowing help is what i need

you capture life's incongruity so well with that line. good one.

 

[Squiggle]

Wow.. it's like you read into my feelings! I really loved every single line in this. Such a great poem, and you're such a great writer.