hmm.. you don't like?..

[only*cause*you*pain*]

So, you guys don't like my stuff??.. I put in two other poems.. ('better?' and 'I'm sorry')
Hmm.. yeah. that's alright..
I know I suck. :

 

[stardragon]

Just because no one commented doesn't mean no one liked them.
To me they seemed more like you just getting things onto paper (electrons) and working out something internal, and maybe hoping for some encouraging words re your situation, rather than something that you were seriously seeking feedback on the words...
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Coitus ergo sum.

 

[Noodle]

Hey, don't take it personal. I read and enjoyed your pieces. Keep posting.