Hipnotic

[KandeKiddTwinx]

12 dollars to get in
cant wait to see whose going to spin
I walk in and feel this vibe
collect all the flyers i couldnt get from one tribe
walk in one room and hear the sound of trance
walk in another
i cant help but dance
first my legs then my arms
leave me alone
i'm not doing any harm
im just bumpin, feelin my heart thumpin
there is no way you are going to get me to quit going to raves
because you cannot save me from the feeling i got when i went to my first rave
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Peace, Love, And Candy!!!
*~*TwinX*~*

 

[Socks-On-Cocks]

not bad per se... try not to rhyme "raves" with "rave"

 

[crossymaster]

Yeah, ryhming "raves" with "rave" is almost as bad as ryhming "socks" with "cocks".