HIGH HOPES

[frostyangel]

possible chance,
that tomorrow never ends.
And you'll never see my
smiling face again.
possible chance,
that I will never know.
How we never discovered all
the room we had to grow.
Here's that life of what not is wanted
through reality...to feel empty
without something other than
yourself. Alone...now I understand
How to be...
To a hand that I held that ended
up being my own..and your memories
left me paralized..and empty to words
that help me through yet another nite,
that I felt complete, by myself...I was
around the happiness I once never
knew. I jumped back in fear...in
hope that I would never under come
this...
I found this strongest moment in
knowing that I stood tall against
the wind that you blown to knock
me over...and then the thunder
from my heart cracked the lighten,
that made you smile so electrically...
And the rain, that was your tears that
were brought on by another,
I put the bucket under those wings.
Hoping to dry them off, so you'll
beable to fly over, all the happiness
you needed to see...that could be
So that when the times got tuff
you knew there was some where
save you could go.
Under every shadow, there was the
gapping hole, from your eyes, that
made me see the light. After each
petal of the rose fell gingerly toward
the ground, and even though they
became hard they still were alive
to me
And every broken pavement
you try to step over, you didn't
see that you were believing in
some kind of power higher than
thee..even though you said you
didn't believe
Washing in and out of the ocean
reaching for dry land. I became to
finally realize who I am.

 

[rm-rf]

wow!
this was totally awesome. i can relate to just about every word in this. this is something im going through my self right now, discovering who I am through bad times. This really filled me with a lot of hope, thanks!

Under every shadow, there was the
gapping hole, from your eyes, that
made me see the light. After each
petal of the rose fell gingerly toward
the ground, and even though they
became hard they still were alive
to me
I know exactly what this feels like. I am going through some really tough times right now, and the tougher it gets, the more I realize how strong I am of a person because of it! I am starting to realize that I have a bright future ahead of me (somethign I never realized before) and that I can overcome just about anything.
Truley inspirational

 

[rm-rf]

possible chance,
that tomorrow never ends.
And you'll never see my
smiling face again.
possible chance,
that I will never know.
How we never discovered all
the room we had to grow.
i love this part too! it says to me "im not scared of anything, im stronger than fear"

 

[Xplore]

And the rain, that was your tears that
were brought on by another,
I put the bucket under those wings.
Hoping to dry them off, so you'll
beable to fly over, all the happiness
you needed to see...that could be
So that when the times got tuff
you knew there was some where
save you could go.
Wow, this is indeed strong and inspirational. Thank you for shining such a positive ray of hope. See you soon sweetie.

 

[Squeaks]

Hey Willy!
Like I said you keep getting better and better. Just think about what we talked about how those probems you where going through caused you pain which you expressed through your other poems.
Those where filled with sorrow and sadness and pain.
As you can see with each passing moment that day goes by that little thing called hope and the feeling that things will work out is starting to shine in your poems.
I just hope that shine that you can capture in your poems will be deflected like a sunbeam off your face next time I see ya
Keep up hope keep it afloat

 

[E-girl]

To a hand that I held that ended
up being my own..and your memories
left me paralized..and empty to words
that help me through yet another nite
quite possibly one of my new favorites by you...
just another piece that shows how strong you've become against the cruel world...
you are a wonderful person,
and good things will find you.
and all you had to go through,
will seem worth it finally.
hope is good.